kk_spirit
male - 19 years, Malaysia
Blog / [ INAH ]
Tuesday, 26 August 2008 at 11:22
First I want to define my title..
"INAH" , which stand for...
Insomnia
Nervous
Act hardworking
Insomnia-
I am bored with stuffy mineral water,so I dunk a package of Lipton Yellow Label Tea...
The taste so so only...
But after I drank,I felt no more sleepy...
I felt very very very tired...
My eyes still open very big..(my eyes open maximum still very small la actually)
Nervous-
Besides that,I felt extremely nervous about the coming physics mid-term test...
Although it's only consist of three chapter,but it is enough to burst up my head...
I felt difficulties to breathe...
Physics "eating" my mind...
I hate the feeling of exam...
Especially those subject that I not yet prepared..(can said all the subject le~__~)
Act Hardworking-
Actually I am writing my English PEN0015 essay..
People will thought i'm hardworking..
But actually I can finished it earlier but I keep wasting my time with useless stuff...
The combination of these feeling and situation make me felt helpless and hopeless...
What is life??
"There is still have bitter taste inside the sweet...
Contrastively,there are sweet taste inside bitter..."(you know i know,that's ok la^^)
Just how you going to judge them...
some people are pessimistic..(searching for bitter in sweet)
some people are optimistic..(searching for sweet in bitter)
We are the person who decided which road to be taken...
I hope that I am one part of optimistic,but in fact...
I am pessimistic in my own stuff...
But trust me...
Everything will just fine afterwards...
Think too much wouldn't help in solving the problem...(as what she always told me)
We should cheer up...
we should optimistic...think positively...
not using my lung to talk ok...
what we think will affect the gut/ending of the story...
[Actually i want to improve my english by writing english blog..]
[so,tell me where I have any grammar mistakes]
[thanks for the help]
Comments 1
Natasha Lim (Wednesday, 17 September 2008 at 05:40)
I always searching for sweetness in this 85% dark chocolate but end up spitting it out. Okaaay. Grammar. I might be younger than you so it's up to you to listen to me.
*The taste is so-so only.
*But after I drank it, I no longer felt sleepy.
*I have opened my eyes to it's fullest extend until it looks very big. (I really don't know how to fix that one so I think this is the best substitute)
*Besides that, I FEEL extremely nervous about my coming physics mid-term test
*Although IT only consist of 3 topics, it is enough to burst up (I think explode or BURST only sounds better) my head. (By the way, you don't have to put but if you already have ALTHOUGH in the sentence)
*I hate the feelings of having to cram for exams. OR I hate exams. It makes me unhappy.
*Especially for those subjects that I have not prepared for yet.
*People will think that I'm hardworking.
*Actually, I can finish it earlier but I keep wasting my time with useless stuff (It's not necessary to put a BUT in front. It's the same as asking a dead person "Are you OK?"
*The combination of these FEELINGS and SITUATIONS make me FEEL helpless and hopeless...
*There's always a bitter taste inside the sweet.
*We ourselves are suppose to decide which road to take.
*I hope that I am one of the optimist, but on the contrary, I happen to be pessimistic in my own stuff.
*Everything will be fine afterwards.
*Thinking too much wouldn't help in solving this problem.
*We should be optimistic.
*I am not using my lungs to talk (I have no idea what do you mean by that)
You're 17 and you really need to use a more advanced english. And my friends and I, we realized that teachers like it better if you wrote your essays like this,
"It was a tremendously beautiful evening with puffy white clouds floating in the sky of a beautiful orange. The setting sun looked like a great big orange, shining its rays down upon us."
Yeah, something like that. I don't know if you still write those things but I guess being descriptive is very useful.
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