Blog / The Open Window
Tuesday, 26 January 2010 at 16:04
The Open Window
The open window; fun!!
With the breeze blowing in
Chilled my bones
I make no bones of this
I would not have liked to miss
Challenged my soul
Chilled my bones
Showed difference between the pole
Difference in life role
Took the heart in unanimous toll
Life a game not to in haste uncoil
[i]Chilled my bones!!
But to breathe in its essence
A risk taking in lord’s presence
The confinement of thoughts in mind
To righteous actions remind
Say what you will; you will break bones
Chilled no doubt ;every ones bones!!
The open window
Still remains open
Breeze has changed its nature
Warmth of Sun is in its nurture
Caressing doubts and chill of fears
Bringing in the hope of better life gears
Chilled the bones no more!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir
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Comments 15
gprasanta2008 1 September 2011
Delightful and enjoyable!
subhsoul 15 October 2010
hi Malini
The Open Window,really opens up some delicate veins of emotions.
Somewhere along the journey thru Open Window,it seemed I was lost and chilled but saw the light and was back after the warmth.
Nice work.Keep it up!
-subh
DrSteeves 8 May 2010
VERY NICE
Sweet words are easy to say,
Sweet things are easy 2 buy,
but sweet people are difficult to find.
Life ends when u stop dreaming,
hope ends when u stop believing,
Love ends when u stop caring,
Friendship ends when u stop sharing.
So share this with whom ever u consider a friend.
To love without condition.....................
to talk without intention.........
to give without reason............and
to care without expectation.......
is the heart of a true friend....
hi
can we be friends.......?
pls reply to steevenraj@gmail.com
deendee2 13 April 2010
very nice.. the imagination have no eyes and ears..................
deendee2 13 April 2010
very nice.. the imagination have no eyes and ears..................
PoetessMalini 5 March 2010
- SHIMSENTERPRISES:
Zara Tum Sham Dhalny Do
K Suraj Ko To Jany Do
Parindon Ko To Urny Do
Zra Tum Sham Dhalny Do
Abi Tu Asman Ka Rang
Nikhray Ga
Abi Khushbo B Bikhray Gi
Abi Mosam B Badly Ga
Abi Tu Chand Nikly Ga
Abi Manzar Badalny Main Zra C Dair
Baqi Hay
Abi Dil K Sambhalny Main
Zra C Dair Baqi Hai
CHALY JANA!
Abi 2, 4 Pal
2, 4 Sadyan Sath Rehny Do
Mujhy Kuch
Aaj Kehnay Do
Bas Apny Pas Rehny Do,
Mujhy Itna To Kehny Do,
“MUJHE TUM SE MOHABBAT HAY”
thik83 19 February 2010
u r chilled thoughts
produces
a warm wave
produce
more ...............
debendrabarik 12 February 2010
I can see a soul hale,
hopeful yet forlon
Horrors swooning down
yo, in a turbulent gale
Let's not wait for the unknown,
But surely you can hope
that the chill of the night
goes, with the morning sun
Dont close that window just yet
Lets look at a better
and fresher world
Lest it becomes too late........
kbdgr8est
11 February 2010
Interesting words
pradeepkjoshi 9 February 2010
Hello
thanks for accepting as friend.