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Dev_S
male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada
Blog / Finally, another poem worth putting up here
Thursday, 12 March 2009 at 19:36
Times lately have been so troubled
I have now been truly humbled
As so many rights have turned wrong
As lonely nights grow ever so long
My links to joy have become less
Losing all that I know does depress
I know I could leave this world now
They would all be happier somehow
Any sense of relief I could find
would, to the truth, make me blind
When ignorance can truly be bliss
From memories I sorely miss
As my days have now grown darker
The light by which I see grows starker
I can look to when I was so high
And give the faintest whisper...Goodbye
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melanie koopmans (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 23:02)
- Dev_S:
haha
- leena44:
- Dev_S:
- leena44:
i like this one to, you have major talent. shesh if i could write like you,daumm.
lol. anybody can write. I don't see what's so special about what i write
I just write emotionally. that's all
beacuse, you get lost in what your reading, in a good way thought, it makes you really think about the effort that was put in to the poem. i cant write worth shit,
I get lost or you get lost? i'm the writer you're the reader
and it's not really effort, so much as I'm just letting my emotions hold my pencil, and letting them go to work on my paper
No, anyone could read it, and they think about whats being said, devon, i could sit all day and not write one thing. so thats effort, or, you have writing skill.
Devon Scott (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 23:00)
- leena44:

haha
- Dev_S:
- leena44:
i like this one to, you have major talent. shesh if i could write like you,daumm.
lol. anybody can write. I don't see what's so special about what i write
I just write emotionally. that's all
beacuse, you get lost in what your reading, in a good way thought, it makes you really think about the effort that was put in to the poem. i cant write worth shit,
I get lost or you get lost? i'm the writer you're the reader
and it's not really effort, so much as I'm just letting my emotions hold my pencil, and letting them go to work on my paper
melanie koopmans (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 22:57)
- Dev_S:
- leena44:
i like this one to, you have major talent. shesh if i could write like you,daumm.
lol. anybody can write. I don't see what's so special about what i write
I just write emotionally. that's all
beacuse, you get lost in what your reading, in a good way thought, it makes you really think about the effort that was put in to the poem. i cant write worth shit,
Devon Scott (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 22:49)
- leena44:
i like this one to, you have major talent. shesh if i could write like you,daumm.
lol. anybody can write. I don't see what's so special about what i write
I just write emotionally. that's all
melanie koopmans (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 22:48)
i like this one to, you have major talent. shesh if i could write like you,daumm.
reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:29)
wow........
♥иασмι-נєωєℓ♥ (Friday, 20 March 2009 at 18:53)
- Dev_S:
- XxLittleFootxX:
- Dev_S:
- XxLittleFootxX:
Welcomes.
I hope they become happier.
Happy is like.. a box of chocolates.
Both are comforting.
lmfao but you can't eat happiness
Sure you can.. Chocolates are happy. But then again... So are alot of things.
hmm that's true lol
but happiness itself, the emotion, isn't edible
I know it's not. But sometimes.. Thats ok. We can't be greedy.. We have to share the happiness.
Devon Scott (Friday, 20 March 2009 at 18:07)
- XxLittleFootxX:


- Dev_S:
- XxLittleFootxX:
Welcomes.
I hope they become happier.
Happy is like.. a box of chocolates.
Both are comforting.
lmfao but you can't eat happiness
Sure you can.. Chocolates are happy. But then again... So are alot of things.
hmm that's true lol
but happiness itself, the emotion, isn't edible
Rei (Friday, 20 March 2009 at 00:50)
- Dev_S:
- AdmiredDisorder:
well thought out rhyming couplet
life is always troubling isn't it?
if it wasn't I guess we would never have had the blues or deep poetry
a tragedy can be beautiful too even shakespeare wrote some
great poem
whoa thanks.
this is true. shakespeare wrote to many plays and poems to even count. I just wonder where he got his inspiration
thanks
a life of wondering "why?" possibly
Did any of the really popular writers we all learn from in school have perfect lives?
>.> personally I think "perfection" or "normal" are two completely undefinable terms in everyday lifestyles
and if it is definable in someone's lifestyle... then they probably never wrote anything deep like this
the perfect mind comes from an imperfect lifestyle and plenty of time to think it all over
or somethin like that :3
♥иασмι-נєωєℓ♥ (Thursday, 19 March 2009 at 21:47)
- Dev_S:
- XxLittleFootxX:
Welcomes.
I hope they become happier.
Happy is like.. a box of chocolates.
Both are comforting.
lmfao but you can't eat happiness
Sure you can.. Chocolates are happy. But then again... So are alot of things.
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