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Dev_S

male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada

Blog / Loving Reunion. Heartbreaking Reality.

Monday, 4 August 2008 at 19:03

It's been a month since I saw you last
Infatuated thoughts of you
I really thought they had passed
My hopes for you have still been dashed
And I must leave my love in the past

There is a big challenge I must face
While my heart yearns to be with you
To not show how I feel, my mind races
You are to close though, your love I can taste
I just wish I could tell you, face to face

My one wish, to hold your hand in mine
And to tell you how much I love you
It seems I'm waiting for a sign
To hold you in my arms and call you mine
Though that will never come, my heart keeps cryin'

I must say goodbye, to my hopes and dreams
Of one day telling you I love you
My soul has been split upon it's seams
My heartbreak been taken to extremes
And my tears designing loving schemes

yeah. my first poem in about two months. I'm a bit rusty, I know. but I'm just happy I'm over my writers block.

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    reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:31)

    i agree with rebecca

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    ♥иασмι-נєωєℓ♥ (Monday, 23 February 2009 at 21:07)

    This was a horrible idea...
    My god Devon none of these are even about me!
    They're about other girls you love! :'(

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    melanie (Sunday, 7 December 2008 at 15:57)

    this is so good
    keep it up

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    krissy (Tuesday, 14 October 2008 at 16:36)

    awsomelyness insaneness good man

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    Molly Murray (Monday, 15 September 2008 at 17:30)

    Wow. That's some really good poetry. Really remind me of what I'm going through right now...

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    Devon Scott (Thursday, 21 August 2008 at 12:09)

    - Rebeccaface:
    yeah this is really good.
    it deffinitly carries the words of a true writer.
    :)

    thanks :)

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    Rebecca (Thursday, 21 August 2008 at 04:13)

    yeah this is really good.
    it deffinitly carries the words of a true writer.
    :)

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    Devon Scott (Sunday, 10 August 2008 at 10:24)

    - lilprincess_1990:
    thats a really good poem,............i cried just reading it............hope you can write more

    wow...thanks. I'll definetely try to keep writing

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    lilprincess_1990 (Sunday, 10 August 2008 at 08:45)

    thats a really good poem,............i cried just reading it............hope you can write more

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