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male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada

Blog / Love out of Reach

Tuesday, 13 May 2008 at 19:32

I find it hard to tell you
The pain of love I go through
The pain I cause to those who
To those who love me
Though this pain is nothing new
It is not what I wish to be
To cause pain, I don't want to see
From this curse, I wish to be free

Being the nice guy has a price
Makes my heart, as cold as Ice
But I promise, I cannot slice
Lest I find love I desire
A love that will entice
I love to take me higher
Love, that could dance on a wire
Love, I would never be a liar

I found the one to warm my heart
Sadly, we are always apart
Separated by an art
A thousand miles of the country
And the hold of her lovers heart
A long and tiresome journey
To help my love come to see
For her love there is nobody
that is better for her, than me

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  • http://netlog.com/nogoodbitch007reva mariemarierevanogoodbitch007http://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/024/978/24978127.jpgUnited StatesTexas nogoodbitch007 16

    reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 14:08)

    - Dev_S:
    - nogoodbitch007:
    ok....HOW DO U COME UP WITH THIS STUFF??? ITS FREAKIN' AMAZING!!

    lmfao umm I just write what I feel...

    well its amazing

  • http://netlog.com/Dev_SDevon ScottScottDevonDev_Shttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/512/26512132.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia Dev_S 17

    Devon Scott (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 10:24)

    - nogoodbitch007:
    ok....HOW DO U COME UP WITH THIS STUFF??? ITS FREAKIN' AMAZING!!

    lmfao umm I just write what I feel...

  • http://netlog.com/nogoodbitch007reva mariemarierevanogoodbitch007http://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/024/978/24978127.jpgUnited StatesTexas nogoodbitch007 16

    reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:32)

    ok....HOW DO U COME UP WITH THIS STUFF??? ITS FREAKIN' AMAZING!!

  • http://netlog.com/fairytale_monsterJulia SSJuliafairytale_monsterhttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/015/008/15008338.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia fairytale_monster 16

    Julia S (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:22)

    - Dev_S:
    - fairytale_monster:
    I love this one. I like the rhyme scheme in the first stanza :)

    thanks. I thought I used the same rhyme scheme throughout though :)
    You did, I just liked the first stanza the best :)

  • http://netlog.com/Dev_SDevon ScottScottDevonDev_Shttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/512/26512132.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia Dev_S 17

    Devon Scott (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:20)

    - fairytale_monster:
    I love this one. I like the rhyme scheme in the first stanza :)

    thanks. I thought I used the same rhyme scheme throughout though :)

  • http://netlog.com/fairytale_monsterJulia SSJuliafairytale_monsterhttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/015/008/15008338.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia fairytale_monster 16

    Julia S (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:14)

    I love this one. I like the rhyme scheme in the first stanza :)

  • http://netlog.com/Dev_SDevon ScottScottDevonDev_Shttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/512/26512132.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia Dev_S 17

    Devon Scott (Wednesday, 30 July 2008 at 19:28)

    - Ashley_2115:
    i already told you this but your an amazing writter
    i love this poem:)

    thanks ashley :)

  • http://netlog.com/leena44melanie koopmanskoopmansmelanieleena44http://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/969/26969001.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia leena44 16

    melanie koopmans (Tuesday, 29 July 2008 at 18:21)

    skittles your awsome at writing.. ive never seen better writing.. and there is alot of good stuff out there.. you got skills.. hugs:)

  • http://netlog.com/Dev_SDevon ScottScottDevonDev_Shttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/512/26512132.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia Dev_S 17

    Devon Scott (Tuesday, 29 July 2008 at 17:41)

    - sportycutie:
    this is so amazing
    no joke
    it's one of the best poems i've ever read
    your tanlented: ]

    thanks :)

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