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Dev_S

male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada

Blog / Gone

Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 18:26

Sitting here in detention
Trying to escape the mention
That I am simply alone
Listening to the teacher drone
"What a fool" I think to me
I never wanted this to be

This life is all very simple
I need no visit to temple
Just be able to shut my mouth
And think, "Oh there goes my youth"
Leading not unto happiness
But showing death by distress

I need none of the sympathy
I get none of the empathy
I have none of the love to mate
I want none of the burning hate
I receive what I do not want
I lose my friends, and now they haunt

I honestly can't live this way
I am feeling death, day after day
Something bad needs to change, and soon
Or my body be found, high noon
I can leave this land of sorrow
And be taken home down below

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    reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:33)

    so totally awesome dude :)

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    Kalice Griffin (Friday, 18 July 2008 at 13:12)

    devon your so great at writing!!

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    Taryn :] (Monday, 2 June 2008 at 02:30)

    Not bad.
    Not bad at all.

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    ♥ Naomi-Jewel ♥ (Saturday, 26 April 2008 at 19:56)

    Devon.. That was really good. I love it.

  • http://netlog.com/MariAttackTMMarilena SimonianSimonianMarilenaMariAttackTMhttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/024/194/24194643.jpgGreeceImathia MariAttackTM 15

    Marilena Simonian (Saturday, 26 April 2008 at 00:58)

    great poem [:
    you have a talent for writing

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    Andrew Monaghan (Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 19:34)

    hahaha u got stuck with a teacher that is smaler then u ha fack :)

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    Christina McIntyre (Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 18:51)

    Nice poem

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