Dev_S
male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada
Blog / Gone
Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 18:26
Sitting here in detention
Trying to escape the mention
That I am simply alone
Listening to the teacher drone
"What a fool" I think to me
I never wanted this to be
This life is all very simple
I need no visit to temple
Just be able to shut my mouth
And think, "Oh there goes my youth"
Leading not unto happiness
But showing death by distress
I need none of the sympathy
I get none of the empathy
I have none of the love to mate
I want none of the burning hate
I receive what I do not want
I lose my friends, and now they haunt
I honestly can't live this way
I am feeling death, day after day
Something bad needs to change, and soon
Or my body be found, high noon
I can leave this land of sorrow
And be taken home down below
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reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:33)
so totally awesome dude
Kalice Griffin (Friday, 18 July 2008 at 13:12)
devon your so great at writing!!
Taryn :] (Monday, 2 June 2008 at 02:30)
Not bad.
Not bad at all.
♥ Naomi-Jewel ♥ (Saturday, 26 April 2008 at 19:56)
Devon.. That was really good. I love it.
Marilena Simonian (Saturday, 26 April 2008 at 00:58)
great poem [:
you have a talent for writing
Andrew Monaghan (Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 19:34)
hahaha u got stuck with a teacher that is smaler then u ha fack
Christina McIntyre (Thursday, 24 April 2008 at 18:51)
Nice poem
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