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Blog / Pure Hatred...yeah...another poem

Thursday, 14 February 2008 at 16:45

My loathing for you is endless
My hatred makes me mindless
My fury, I can never express
You don't see how much I suppress

You break my heart, drop me dead
My heart has never so much bled
Drowning in the tears that I shed
My soul is black, my eyes are red

You go to steal my best friend
And intoxicate her to no end
Fear and Pain are what I now send
Your life is what I hope to end

You have made me a different man
I no longer hold your vile hand
It was your soul that you have damned
Knife to your throat, now in my hand

Yeah, I know it's a lot darker than my usual work.


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  • http://netlog.com/nogoodbitch007reva mariemarierevanogoodbitch007http://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/024/978/24978127.jpgUnited StatesTexas nogoodbitch007 16

    reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:34)

    i like this one best


  • http://netlog.com/Dev_SDevon ScottScottDevonDev_Shttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/026/512/26512132.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia Dev_S 17

    Devon Scott (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:18)

    - fairytale_monster:
    Holy crap. This poem made me fear for my life. So much emotion... My fave so far. Definitely.


    wow. thanks julia :) glad you like it


  • http://netlog.com/fairytale_monsterJulia SSJuliafairytale_monsterhttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/015/008/15008338.jpgCanadaBritish Columbia fairytale_monster 16

    Julia S (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:11)

    Holy crap. This poem made me fear for my life. So much emotion... My fave so far. Definitely.


  • http://netlog.com/What_It_AintSarah CruickshankCruickshankSarahWhat_It_Ainthttp://en.netlogstatic.com/p/tt/018/416/18416874.jpgCanadaOntario What_It_Aint 16

    Sarah Cruickshank (Saturday, 23 February 2008 at 12:54)

    so did u get inspried for that poem by your own life or is it just a beautiful peom
    ??


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    DrewTaylor (Friday, 15 February 2008 at 12:11)

    wooow.. pretty dark stuff maan, but i like it; :)


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    melanie koopmans (Thursday, 14 February 2008 at 18:33)

    skittles.. dats a dark.... awsome tho! luvs ya hugs... p.s stupid bitch



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