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Blog / Pure Hatred...yeah...another poem
Thursday, 14 February 2008 at 16:45
My loathing for you is endless
My hatred makes me mindless
My fury, I can never express
You don't see how much I suppress
You break my heart, drop me dead
My heart has never so much bled
Drowning in the tears that I shed
My soul is black, my eyes are red
You go to steal my best friend
And intoxicate her to no end
Fear and Pain are what I now send
Your life is what I hope to end
You have made me a different man
I no longer hold your vile hand
It was your soul that you have damned
Knife to your throat, now in my hand
Yeah, I know it's a lot darker than my usual work.
Comments 14 Sort comments:
reva marie (Saturday, 21 March 2009 at 08:34)
i like this one best
Devon Scott (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:18)
- fairytale_monster:
glad you like it
Holy crap. This poem made me fear for my life. So much emotion... My fave so far. Definitely.
wow. thanks julia
Julia S (Sunday, 2 November 2008 at 20:11)
Holy crap. This poem made me fear for my life. So much emotion... My fave so far. Definitely.
Sarah Cruickshank (Saturday, 23 February 2008 at 12:54)
so did u get inspried for that poem by your own life or is it just a beautiful peom
??
DrewTaylor (Friday, 15 February 2008 at 12:11)
wooow.. pretty dark stuff maan, but i like it;
melanie koopmans (Thursday, 14 February 2008 at 18:33)
skittles.. dats a dark.... awsome tho! luvs ya hugs... p.s stupid bitch
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