Dev_S
male - 17 years, Richmond, Canada
Blog 20
my poems. and a few other blogs. comments please.
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The Break up / Part 2
I am realizing the mistake I made
The mistake that cut both our hearts with the blade
The blade made up from words of the wrong charade
The charade that caused me to have the wrong tirade
The pain that comes from regret
My mind races as I watch the sun set
This love is something we shouldn't forget
I don't want to put your heart in a hockey net
If I thought the truth was always being told
I would have realized that neither of us are so bold
We cherish each other, Neither of us should be sold
This love is known, but it shall remain untold
I welcome you back into my love
I hold you in my arms as you take me above
I want to feel your warmth once more
I want your tender heart to soar
Yes, I know. It's not as good as part 1. but leave some comments anyway
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The break up / Part 1
Saying I love you is never enough
Trying to keep this together, it's tough
This relationship, it's going way to rough
I guess my personality just isn't to buff
Saying I care, you consider it a lie
Finding it hard not to do drugs, to get high
It hurts, My heart is frozen in a cry
The end of this love, It soon draws nigh
I can't take this fighting anymore
I miss the feeling of love, My spirit soars
This pain is something I can't ignore
The opportunity is knocking, I will open the door
Your heart might have been broken, so is mine
Hearing you cry, it pushes me past the line
I can only hope that we will be fine
Your love for me, it was always divine -
Pain
The greatest pain I have ever felt
Is not being hit with a belt
It is not being beaten to death
Nor is it feeling my last breath
The greatest disspointment I have ever known
Is not the sting of a toenail, ingrown
It is not merely a broken bone
Nor is it seeing my greatest enemy take the throne
The greatest challenge I have ever faced
Is not simply getting that test aced
It is not finding the one true love
Nor is it going that simple step above
No, The greatest hardship I have ever faced
Is having the devotion of my two friends debased
It is seeing love, torn apart before me
And knowing I can do nothing for thee
Tell me what you think please -
I'm complaining again
What's the deal with....everyone, on here, who posts comments on pictures that are hardly readable. The only words that are spelled right consist of one, maybe two letters. Now, I don't know how the people receiving those comments feel, but I know if I were them, I wouldn't bother thanking whoever posted the comment, because I wouldn't be able to know what the hell they were trying to say in the first place. Spelling is quite possibly the easiest skill on the planet, and few people seem to have actually grasped it. IT'S NOT THAT HARD PEOPLE! You don't have to have word spellcheck your work to know if something is spelled wrong. If you use the reason that bad spelling is faster, I bet you I could type not only faster than you, but better as well. Now all I request is that you stop making yourselves look like complete morons with these picture comments, and start spelling so that most people can read you without any problems.
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remember
The power of love is strong
I never thought it would lead me wrong
You could have kept me together
If you had thought this was forever
I remember your smile, your laugh
I remember you cut my heart in half
I remember your tears, your sadness
I remember you caused my madness
The feelings that I don't want to forget
Are the feelings that cause my regret
If only I could express them
I wouldn't have to repress them
I remember your beauty, your charm
I remember you never forewarned
I remember your love
I remember you, and me
I don't want to forget
the feelings that cause my regret -
another poem....
Could we have a Moment of Silence
To remember all of the hearts
That were broken and lost
Because of love's pure frost
Could we have a Moment of Silence
To remember all of the tears
That have been shed and cried
Because of our main fear
Could we have a Moment of Silence
To remember all of the love
That has been lost and forgotten
Because nobody seems to care
Could we have a Moment of Silence
To remember all of the hope
That has been broken and shattered
Along with these hearts that have bled
Please, just give us a Moment of Silence
To remember and realize
The truth behind our false lies
not my best work, I know, but some people still think it's good. -
My second poem
Amazing how it always happens like this
It starts with a smile and ends with a kiss
What happens along the way makes me reminisce
And realize how all these things are amiss
Amazing how two people who've never met
Can end up as the perfect set
When I see your face I'm never upset
And I will never have a single regret
Amazing how a relationship that had never been
Could end up as the one that everyone has seen
Nobody has tried to step between
The unknown love, addictive as nicotine
Amazing how we don't know what we feel
Until it's to late, my head spins and reels
I love going through this painful ordeal
If only to you, I get to sit and kneel -
A poem I wrote
I was happy as can be
more than your eyes could see
I know I didn't show it
you were supposed to notice
I would have died for you
I loved you more than anything
I know I didn't show it
but you were supposed to notice
Lonely and Broken
Without you by my side
Lonely and Broken
I have nowhere to hide
Lonely and Broken
In you I confide
Over the summer
I thought we were going to be together
I thought we were forever
I guess I thought wrong
You say I don't care anymore
That makes me feel sore
If you only knew my truth
I was an idiot in my youth
Lonely and Broken
Without you by my side
Lonely and Broken
I have nowhere to hide
Lonely and Broken
In you I confide
You say you care about me
yet you don't even talk to me
You say you want to be friends
Yet the sad truth gives me the bends
I want you to know how I feel
It's like I ate my last meal
I can't be happy anymore
My spirit lives fallen and torn
Lonely and Broken
Without you by my side
Lonely and Broken
I have nowhere to hide
Lonely and Broken
In you I confide
You say I treated you badly
I never intended to, sadly
You say I tried to avoid you
Yet I wanted nothing more than to be with you
You think I'm an ass
The truth is I'm an idiot, facing an impasse
Lonely and Broken
Without you by my side
Lonely and Broken
I have nowhere to hide
Lonely and Broken
In you I confide
Dedicated to M.R.S.
well, that's the first poem I've ever wrote. Lemme know what you think. be brutally honest. -
Mass Hypocrisy
To all the perverted guys on netlog: most of you are just making yourselves look like horny bastards who just want to get laid. it's not helping the male stereotype that all men are assholes looking for nothing more than sex. To all the guys posting blogs against those people, good for you. I do seem to find a problem with you guys as well though. one day, I'm readin a guys blog that girls should get respect, and I'm agreeing with him the whole time. a couple hours later, I find him asking girls for cam-to-cam shit. there are a few guys on here who aren't like this. they will write a good blog, and not turn on it an hour later. I commend those guys. my point: If your a guy, don't be an asshole who just wants to get laid, and don't post blog messages asking people to respect women if your gonna ask for a cam-to-cam show an hour later. your just being an idiotic hypocrit if you do. You should respect women for who they are, and not be jumping at every opportunity to have sex.
To all the slutty girls on netlog: stop posting half naked pictures of yourselves. it doesn't get you the respect you want. in fact, it wouldn't get you ANY respect, so why do you do it? do you want horny perverts to come onto your page and say stuff like "mmm girl I'd fuck that", does that make you happy to know that all a guy want with you is to fuck you? there are also girls that I see agreeing with blogs about giving women respect and stopping guys from being assholes, then I check their profile, and lo and behold, they are contradicting everything they just said by having a couple pictures in just a bra and panties on their profile. I will admit though, there are some girls that don't do this, and I for one respect them a lot more than if they did do that. my point: girls, don't post pictures that make you look like sluts, it doesn't get you any respect, and don't go agreeing with the good blogs if all I'm gonna find on your profile is a complete contradiction of what you just said. its just makes you hypocritical. You have to respect yourself before anyone else can respect you. -
Music
I need new music. seriously. I want to listen to some good artists that I haven't heard yet. I like almost all music styles, mostly metal, rock, punk, techno, hip-hop and rap. give me some suggestions. anything. please give me some good suggestions, ANYTHING, so long as its good music.
